Background Information
In recent discussions of Bacon's Rebellion, a controversial issue has been whether Bacon and his followers had proper justification and means for rebellion against the richer whites and the Native Americans or was it unnecessary. On one hand, some writers take the side of Bacon and his followers, for example Zinn and Stefoff, in A Younger People's History of the United States, who portray Bacon as a hero. This piece combined all the information given in all the other articles [The Wikipedia document, the Declaration of the People, etc.] and then some. From this perspective, "It was not a war of American colonist against the British. Instead, Bacon's Rebellion was an uprising of angry, poor colonists against two groups they saw as their enemies. One was the Indians. The other was the colonists' own rich and privileged leaders." [35] "By the 1760s rich landowners controlled most of eastern Virginia. As a result, many ordinary people felt that they were pushed toward the frontier. Life was more dangerous there. The settlers had problems with the Native Americans. They wanted the colony's leaders to fight the Indians, but the politicians and big landowners who ran the colony wouldn't fight- maybe because they were using some of the Indians spies and allies against the others." [36] This made the frontiers men were angry because they felt like the colonial government had let them down. Many Virginians were unhappy because of terrible conditions they had as servants or the state of living in poverty.
Then, "In 1676, these unhappy Virginians found a leader in Nathaniel Bacon." [37] According to Howard Zinn and Rebecca Stefoff, "Bacon owned a good bit of land. He probably cared more about fighting Indians than about helping the poor." Even with the fact, they felt as if Bacon was on their side, so they elected him into the House of Burgesses, which was the colonial government. Following the election, Bacon was ready to take matters into his own hands, as it says, "Bacon was ready to send armed militias, or armed grouped of citizens, to fight the Indians. These militias would act outside the government control. This alarmed William Berkeley, the governor of the colony. Berkeley called Bacon a rebel and had him captured." Berkeley later had him [Bacon] released after two thousand of Bacon's supporters had marched into Jamestown, but right when he was free, he began raiding the Indians and set Jamestown, their capital, on fire. "The rebellion was under way."
Bacon gave his reason for the rebellion in a paper called "Declaration of the People," in which showed the frontiersman's hatred of the Indians and the common people's anger toward the rich, and Bacon's accusations of Sir William Berkeley, Sir Henry Chichley, William Claiburne Junior, Lieut. Coll. Christopher Wormeley, Thomas Hawkins, William Sherwood, Phillip Ludwell, along with all the others listed on the document, as to their wrong doings with unfair taxes, non-protection of the western farmers from the Indians, going against the King, etc. A few months following, Bacon got sick and died.
Shortly after the death of Bacon, an armed ship came to restore order. They killed many servants and then the remaining, they captured, sent back to their masters, and they punished them [thirty lashes with a whip], causing these servants to be in almost a worst shape they before the rebellion. There was basically a systematic ladder with England controlling the new American colony, and the new American colony controlling the Natives. For this reason, most people in Virginia supported the rebellion and one member of Berkeley's council even said that the rebels wanted to take the colony out of the King's hands and into their own. Although another said that, "the Indian problem was the original cause of Bacon's Rebellion, but the poor people had joined because they wanted to seize and share the wealth of the rich.
Many of the poor settlers were mislead. They came to America with the promise of the good lives they would have in American and the possibility of becoming very wealthy, but it that wasn't the case. According to this piece, "Many poor people bound for America became indentured servants. They signed an agreement called an indenture that said that they would repay the cost of their journey to America by working for a master for five or seven years. Often they were imprisoned after signing the indenture, so that they couldn't run away before their ship sailed. Also, the sailing conditions weren't good at all. A musician, by the name of Gottlieb Mittelberger wrote about the terrible trip says, "During the journey the ship is full of pitiful signs of distress-smells, fumes, horrors, vomiting, various kinds of sea-sickness, fever, dysentery, headaches, heat, constipation, boils, scurvy, cancer, mouth-rot.... Add to that shortage of food, hunger, thirst, frost, heat, dampness, fear, misery, vexation, and lamentation as well as other troubles.... On board our ship, on a day on which we had a great storm, a women about to give birth and unable to deliver under the circumstances, was pushed through one of the portholes into the sea...." [41] One thing to keep in mind about this is that the trip took eight to twelve weeks, possibly longer, with a few varying factors. Then, once they got to American these servants were being treated inhumanely and sold as though they were livestock or something along those lines. Plus, there was a constant reality of the saying, "the rich get richer and the poor get poorer." Due to the wealthy being in fear of the Indian hostility, the danger of slave revolts, and the growing class anger of poor whites, they [the wealthy] tried to turn all the others against each other; the poor against the Indians, the blacks against the the Indians, and blacks and white against each other [racism]. Everything developed over time in this same pattern with the divided social and racial classes, these that still exist today. In synapses, Bacon's Rebellion impacted history so much so, that it lead to future rebellions.
Thesis
Was it just for the Indians to be treated poorly during Bacon’s Rebellion?
Body/Discussion
The Indians were very unselfish people. They allowed the colonists to have a portion of land, yet the colonists were so selfish that they still took more without thinking of how the Indian people would feel about it. “The Indians had their lands seized by white frontiersmen.” (“A Young People’s History of the United States” by Howard Zinn and Rebecca Stefoff). Part of the reason for the colonists coming into the Indian’s land was because once the indentured servants became free, they had to be given the land promised to them and the only land that was left wasn’t theirs to be giving away. “Bacon’s Rebellion stated with trouble on Virginia’s western frontier. By the 1670s rich landowners controlled most of eastern Virginia. As a result, many ordinary people felt that they were pushed towards the frontier. Life was more dangerous there.” [Also found in “A Young People’s History of the United States”] To me, I see this as the colonists were just greedy. They received a big portion of land and yet they kept wanting more. Whether or not they had enough land to give to the indentured servants or not, they shouldn’t have continued to go into the Indian land boundaries that they had formerly said they would not protrude. I think that the Indians had all the right to be unhappy about this issue. After all, any of us today would be mad if that were to happen to us. No one should be ok with other people taking what is rightfully ours.
The Indians clearly were not always intentionally harming the colonists. Some of the colonists were even on the natives side of the issues, especially those in the government. “The settlers had problems with the Natives American. They wanted the colony’s leaders to fight the Indians, but the politicians and big landowners who ran the colony wouldn’t fight.” [“A Young People’s History of the United States” by Howard Zinn and Rebecca Stefoffs] This could have or then again could have not been because of issues like tobacco, but regardless, if the Indians were really in the wrong about how they were acting towards the colonists, the government would have had to uphold their duty and step in to do something about it, even if it were only slight. If what they did was only slight, then they would maintain the piece and still have the opportunities of trading with the Indians, while defending and protecting their people at the same time. “When Bacon began his private war against Indians, Berkeley – who hoped to keep the peace among the frontiers – declared the upstart a rebel.” [“The Old Dominion in the Seventeenth Century” by Warren Billings, ed.] If the Indians treatment towards the colonists were to really be that big of a deal, the government would have had to step in and do something about it. But they did not, therefore showing that the Indians were treating the colonists in an acceptable manner. This is presented clearly because Berkeley went as far as to announce Bacon as a rebel for trying to fight the Indians, keep in mind that Bacon and Berkeley were formerly on good terms, as stated in “The Old Dominion in the Seventeenth Century,” where it says, “Bacon’s status as a member of prominent English family gained him recognition from Virginia’s governor, Sir William Berkeley.” All in all, the Virginian government did not see the treatment of the Indians towards the colonists as an issue, so clearly it was not that immoral.
How can anyone be sure that Bacon had probable cause for stating the rebellion? No one knows that he did for sure. Although some people see Bacon as a hero, helping the poor farmers, others thought he was greedy. “Bacon owned a good bit of land. He probably cared more about fighting Indians than about helping the poor. Still, the common people of Virginia felt that he was on their side.” [“A Young People’s History of the United States” by Howard Zinn and Rebecca Stefoffs] Like is said in the quote, Bacon might have cared more about fighting the Indians than about helping the poor. For all we know, he could have very well been an inspirational speaker and convinced many people into believing that his cause was just and was for those people.
Realistically, were a few Indians killing one of Bacon’s dear friends reason enough to start hatred against Indians as a whole, even the ones that were their “friends”? “Another [referring to one of the members of Governor Berkeley’s council] said that the Indian problem was the original cause of Bacon’s Rebellion, but the poor people had joined because they wanted to seize and share the wealth of the rich.” [“A Young People’s History of the United States”] This comes to show that many of Bacon’s “supporters” were only contributing out of their own wants for more money because after all, the major groups fighting in Bacon’s Rebellion were the Rich Englishmen and the Indians, verses the Poor farmers and Bacon, so money or class was of great relevance.
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Monday, October 20, 2008
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ReplyDelete-Good use of quotes and what you think about them. But I think you need a bit more summarizing of what the quotes are saying.
-The body needs I Say.
-Sorry I didn't realize at first that it was under construction. I should have figured.
Katie, your rough draft is coming together pretty well. It flows well throughout and you used your support(quotes) well. Your thesis is argumentable.
ReplyDelete- I did not follow your thesis throughout the entire essay
ReplyDelete- It's a good piece of writing overall
- I felt that the layout was a odd. Although I understand that will probably change
I would try to shorten your introduction, and gently direct your introduction toward your thesis. In other words, summarize the introduction to list the facts, but the facts your thesis is more so interested in. Also, try to brake up the paragraphs into more paragraphs and attempt to pin point the message of each paragraph. Lastly, I would try dig deeper into the philosophical answer for your thesis. Maybe, for instance, talk about how Bacon may have influenced the poor into truly believing the Indians deserved to be annihilated. The poor were socially, economically, and politically at a loss. They were tempted to rebel against anything at that time. So maybe you could add a twist like, morals were thrown out the window, and the poor ravaged against friendly Indians without sincere purpose or thought of justification. I would just attempt to present deeper thoughts. I always do. Other then these comments, I think your paper was very well written.
ReplyDelete.Good Job Katie
ReplyDelete.Your draft is coming along well
.You use supporting details and quotes
.Your thesis didn't really apply all the way through your draft though
Other than that you have a real good start toward your final!!!